awaken

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awaken

seize the sun upon thy chest, the light embraces the beauty beyond beauty, the eye sees what is, the mind sees what could be...
thoughts arise one by one, she sits, she waits.. her mind now racing against the clock untouched by day, alive by night, outside the wind rushes thoughts stained by broken vows, heart pumping only to bring breath to the dead soul, while she waits, her love, her passion, hides closely to her milk white breast...
she knows, life touched her....

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redbloodink commented on awaken

12-23-2009

Outstanding...... I hope to read more of your work..... red

redbloodink

12/23/2009

I gave this a 10

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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