ANOTHER DAY

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  • Sadness

    ANOTHER DAY

    ANOTHER DAY




    When the moon starts to melt
    when the sun starts to glow
    My soul hides under a blanket
    Not willing to go

    I convince my caitiff soul
    The tears start to flow

    This day would be good
    as I promise my soul
    But deep beneath I know
    This day has another blow
    For my caitiff soul
    Which is not willing to go

    I walk on the streets which were never friendly
    With my head facing down
    my eyes half shut ,trying to avoid the clown

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    exclusivelye commented on ANOTHER DAY

    07-21-2009

    I love your poem. Sadness, the emotion it evokes.

    exclusivelye commented on ANOTHER DAY

    07-21-2009

    Wow. I'm truly sorry for your seemingly dreadful life.

    drewking commented on ANOTHER DAY

    01-23-2009

    nice!! love the last verse..

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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