Another Chance

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  • Inspirational

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    simple, for all to understand the importance of our choices and second chances

    Another Chance


    If we could have another chance
    to live our days once more
    and rectify mistakes we made
    to enhance our mortal score.

    If we could have another chance
    to use our knowledge gained
    perhaps we might become at last
    as fine as God ordained.

    Though we can't retrace our steps
    however stands the score
    the future brings another chance
    for us to try once more.

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    Qualin commented on Another Chance

    08-07-2010

    GAL NO GREATER WORDS HAVE BEEN SPOKEN OF ALL THE POEMS COMBINED..VERY GOOD WRITE OF WISDOM...IF IT WOULD ONLY BE TAKEN TO HEART...THANKS QUALIN
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    bluskyinthenite commented on Another Chance

    03-19-2010

    Yes very true, thanks for the write. People are constant change some for the good some for the worst. But its a change. I for one hope for the best. person i can be. thanks again
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    orsonav commented on Another Chance

    10-11-2009

    This is a wonderful poem about repentance, and have the opportunity to have another chance. This is very inspirational. I think you write well in this genre of poetry. You should write more inspirational poems. I know I would love to read them.
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    rocki commented on Another Chance

    06-05-2009

    very nice, We all deseerve another Chance. I think most people get too many chances that they keep repeating thier mistke. If only everyone could learn from them and then change the path they once traveled.
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    abbadejuju commented on Another Chance

    05-31-2009

    Mr. lightcourier has said it all. Well written and the subject matter is something that will be discussed forever. Many thanks for sharing such thought provoking works. Yeah!
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