An Empty Room

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    An Empty Room

    “An Empty Room”

     

     

    Brightly colored walls

    Damp and cold,

    Wide opened window

    Nice but old,

    A door that hid nothing;

    Just the floor, window and walls.

     

    She keeps on saying

    She’s happy,

    She needed nobody,

    Strong as the wall

    Could face destiny’s call.

    Surpassed all the sorrows;

    Breathe through her window

    And soared her very own floor.

     

    Her eyes tells not

    What you see;

    I read it clearly

    And she’s lonely,

    For her heart

    Is empty.

     

     

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    stellar commented on An Empty Room

    10-08-2009

    I love the metaphor yotch of yourself compared to an empty room...it's quit touching..the usage of words is fine and the rhyming too...a 10 of course...^_^ v

    hdmac commented on An Empty Room

    10-06-2009

    Interesting poem. Needs more substance though. A good read.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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