Alone,Cold

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    Alone,Cold

    There she sits alone and cold,
    This drama is so old.
    She just wants to cry,
    When she hears these lies.
    They call her these names,
    She has to suck up the pain.
    She's to the end of the knife,
    About to give up on life.
    Blood dripping everywhere,
    She is so scared.
    No one who loves her,
    No one who cares,
    In the end it will be ok,
    She dosn't have to stay.

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    Papa commented on Alone,Cold

    04-21-2010

    No life should be lived for the eyes of others. Happiness comes from within. Look in the mirrow and smile. See there it is

    gallaxy commented on Alone,Cold

    09-25-2009

    When one gets called names isn't nice at all. Probally hates themselves. In this case, one should remember the saying" Sticks and stones may break my bones but names will never hurt me ". You need to be strong wt this. They'll stop cause they'll see it DOESN'T bother you. Theirs someone who probally likes and loves you. But when in a hurting stage one is probally blind to see it. Some of the people around are trying to break through to you. When finally someone does, then you know that you don't have to stay in that kind of a relationship if thats what is refered too.........Like the way its written. Good example of an emotion what many people experience.......

    pinky200596 commented on Alone,Cold

    09-21-2009

    hope everyone likes (: lalala this has to be 50 so ...... lalalalala aha bye

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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