ALONE

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ALONE

as i sit all alone a eerie silence surrounds me  i look to see something anything a hint of where i could be but all i see is this darkness surrounding me as the fear creeps upon me i begin to tremble what is this feeling this unknown that has me clinched to my seat  what has come for me what lurks inside that darkness i begin to sweat and  cry for help unable to move or to evan scream I'm trapped inside this terror this dark place  i have  lost all control i start to hear voices they call for me horrifying screams that sends panic threw my soul it seems to come from nowhere and everywhere at the same time the fear  seizes  me  my hearts racing i can barley breathe ive got to escape ive got to get away as i try to fight this unknown assailant this antagonist that's out to entrap and desolate me i start to reconize  where i am as tears of sorrow begin to flow as i realize i cant escape my own mind
           by alexis callison

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stever commented on ALONE

11-15-2009

ITS GREAT TO SEE SUCH GREAT FEELING IN POEMS...ITS GREAT INSIDE MY HEAD W/ MY FRIENDS,,GOOD STUFF

blackshadow commented on ALONE

11-13-2009

You wrote this very well I totally understand where your talking from

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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