ALONE

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    ALONE

    I stand expressionless,
    before the alter of God
    Wondering what it was dat led me this far....
    For i had believed i was over you,
    and my life a better place now.

    I looked around,
    Happy faces and smiles i see.
    Oh, if only they knew this painful truth,
    One that's fast killing the last of me
    Oh, the agonies of self denial.....
    But could anyone understand this?

    Seeing you seated there,
    Wish i could read your mind
    but you and i know the reason u're here,
    to rip my soul apart with those eyes.

    YES, you have succeded,
    Does that make you happy?
    but i'm not going back,
    Not now,
    Not ever,
    Now u're truly alone.

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    BridgetBowen commented on ALONE

    08-09-2009

    I am right there with you. I feel the confusion and pain in your words. I hope you heal quickly and become stronger for it. Thank you for sharing.

    Phoenix9 commented on ALONE

    08-07-2009

    very nice, I like the way the story unfolds, and the emotion and pain you felt, hope you are better,

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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