Almost A Father

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A poem I wrote in tribute to my uncle Benny

Almost A Father

Almost  a Father-By Frances Ayers

No legal ties to bind us,no shared blood in our veins.

Yet I call you father,in many many ways.

If soothing words can dry a tear,and love can ease the way.

When difficult times assault,I know you’ll always stay.

You’ve helped me travel down a path of unfamiliar roads.

So many lessons I have learned ,by stories you have told.

During fearful times you’ve held my hand and told me I am strong.

You’ve shared my joy,and pain alike and gladly came along.

 So richly blessed is how I feel,I’ve had you by my side.

My gratitude is not enough,It’s something I can’t hide.

As time goes on, and life slows down,and one day you are gone.

I’ll think of all the ways you’ve helped me and I’ll carry on.

 

 

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poetheart87 commented on Almost A Father

11-23-2009

You've lost someone great it sounds like. You have a wonderful write, remembering this dear man. Your prose is wonderful. you have the talent of a great writer. Keep on writing.

franny47

11/23/2009

My uncle is still alive,that Is why I wanted to write this tribute.Thanks for reading my poem.My best to you always!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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