All in Time

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A dark poem I wrote inspired by the first line.

All in Time

She touches the little box in her pocket and smiles,
slightly, softly.
Sinisterly.
The corners of her mouth twitch up,
and the flames in her eyes hold a point in the distance,
relentlessly, determinedly.
Murderously.

Absentmindedly, she strokes the velvet -
a grisly caress, in the confines of her pocket.
The lid falls open
carelessly, suddenly.
Satisfyingly.
She reaches inside the terrible box,
and runs her finger over the breakable object.
Slowly, lovingly.

She pulls out the darkened window to his soul.
The eye of her lover,
still fresh.
She makes believe it still gazes,
devoted as if living.
He would never forget,
a part of him was hers.
Not yet his heart…but all in time.
She reaches for a larger box, and smiles.

 

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LovingJesus commented on All in Time

02-20-2010

Very dark and interesting. I know a poem is eerie when it gives me goosebumps, and this one just did.

MindNumbing commented on All in Time

02-19-2010

I love the sinister feel of this... a fun read with a very cool ending :)

sparklizard

02/21/2010

Thanks very much - I did my best to make it as creepy as I could.

heavensdaughter commented on All in Time

02-19-2010

nice dark peice of writting on the woman claiming a man's love =) ha,ha ( might have captured that perfectly lol good job

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