age is just a number

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    • jaylana21
    • Just doing what i do best ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    age is just a number

    Age is just a numba
    But memories last forever
    I dont just wanna be a memory though
    I wanna be ur wifey,friend,and lover
    But time after time You say we have 2 wait because of our age
    But I wonder if your afraid of wat people might say
    So im waitn
    And mins turn to hours and hours turn 2 dayz
    Time seems to stand still Every time someone says ur name
    This waitin is driving me insane
    But its worth it because the longer I wait
    The stronger mah feelings become
    Each day I wait for us too finally be I realize your the only person for me....

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    Lamar86 commented on age is just a number

    04-21-2019

    Very very late comment but, I enjoyed this. The emotion is clearly depicted throughout the poem.

    RickyArsenal commented on age is just a number

    05-30-2009

    Jay, re u 4 real? re u really 16? never mind, just blabbing, love the way u transmit ur feelings into writing like I said, keep it up!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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