After All

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    • justme1970
    • is wanting some comments on these poems,,,,,,good or bad

    After All

    After all you put me through
    how can you come back this way?
    wanting me to see a change
    and listen to what you say?

    The pain you put me through
    was more than I could take
    I was such a fool
    to believe the promises you'd make

    Everytime I'd think you'd stay
    you would only leave me again
    I always knew you would be back
    I just never knew when

    Now your back with the promises
    and my love is not the same
    I don't care like I use to
    and your the only one to blame

    I dont want to take you back
    but my mind tells me to
    but my heart says to remember
    "All you put me through"


                                         Sharon Allen

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    Wakeitha commented on After All

    06-17-2009

    Excellent words, you really make the reader feel like they are there. Ifelt that poem and it was truly deep.

    gothgirl1218 commented on After All

    06-10-2009

    wow thats really good i mean it i just what you mean it kinda sounds like me a lil thats ko how u can connect to your readers

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    justme1970’s Poems (7)

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    "Just Friends" 3
    I'm Still Here 2
    Apart 1
    Mistakes Can Happen 1
    After All 2
    Broken Promises 1
    My Two Little Boys 2