ACCEPT ME

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    ACCEPT ME

    I stepped outside of myself only to find an abundance
    of raw reflections that wear on me like a pair of hurting
    tight shoes that could not be removed.

    Mirroered images that seemed to be different, unreal, ugly, traumatizing, and stereotypic to all who created
    them.............................Except for me.

    See, the reflection I am,
    Throughout life I bore your evil names........... You stupid
    Child, You will never amount to anything, - cry baby,
    You are weak and Too black "Darky" and still I often bear
    your Enigmatic tones and echoeing voices in my head that
    escalates to humor, a chuckle of laughter, whispers or
    topical conversations in amusement to all of
    You................................Except for me.

    Ever just wanted some Acceptance?
    Approval, to be held in high Esteem, Favored, Appreciated.
    Admired, not to be looked down on, but to be looked
    up upon. Maybe your are already there! You know accepted,
    Well known and of course Except for me
    You all got it going on.

    See me now, Same mirrored images
    New Directions, Different Reflections: A Showcase of
    Beauty, Symmetry, Elegance, Intelligence, Harmony, Supreme
    Order, Clarity, Simiplicity. Balance and
    Ahh 'Came the dawn' ~ "You Accept Me!"

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    magati commented on ACCEPT ME

    09-13-2011

    it has some sadness and truth.......but i love the last stanza......the spirit of knowing thyself.......and i do ACCEPT YOUR WHOLE

    stellar commented on ACCEPT ME

    10-19-2009

    Wow love this so much....I'm deeply touch by this one..

    StandingBear commented on ACCEPT ME

    06-29-2009

    A highly philosophical work written well. Acceptance has always been an issue with many of us. Your talented writing speaks volumes. Great write.

    anderneglakay commented on ACCEPT ME

    06-24-2009

    this is a very advance poem i hope people who read your poem do get it that's what i ll call being you

    Niecy

    06/25/2009

    Appreciate you first pausing to read my poem. Thank you for your comment. Certainly I shall return such a response. Peace & Blessigs

    mdpoetgirl commented on ACCEPT ME

    06-09-2009

    I think we all know the feeling of being unaccepted for who we really are. This is a celebratory piece that transcends the negative stereotypes and stigmas that were placed on you. Very uplifting. Great job.

    Niecy

    06/09/2009

    Greetings I welcome your comments & critiques as well... Accept me was written for a friend of mine who now lives a very celebratory life and is very active in community! But stay tuned I will definitely check out your work! Peace & Blessings Niecy

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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