A Walk With Me

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    A Walk With Me

    Walking is to mind divine…

    As I walk all time is mine;

    I drift within the thoughts of yore…

    Conjuring dreams long gone before.

     

    Oh peace I seek and always find…

    Somber days left far behind;

    I watch the mating of birds and bees…

    And glory at majestic trees;

     

    I sip the earth now born of rain…

    Through nostrils filled of sweet mundane;

    Traversing reservoirs of life…

    Far away from stress and strife;

     

    What peace I find in mingled thought…

    Nature’s way is purely taught;

    Through eyes and mind her beauty seep…

    Awaken heartfelt--feelings deep;

     

    Caress thy soul---with all around…

    For what was lost---may soon be found…

    And in the silence; feel natures talk…

    Cause all is good…if you but walk.

    by Trular 

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    DeepEclipse commented on A Walk With Me

    08-13-2010

    Sometimes I stay lost in the past. Better times wished for again perhaps. You blend well here subtle words with strong meaning. And in such a simple thing. Just to walk....and dream. Powerfully humble piece with great meter.
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    twaja commented on A Walk With Me

    06-18-2010

    I REMEBER THOSE WALKS. THEY WERE LONG AND GRATIFYING. YOU JUST PUT ME THERE. ITS BEEN A LONG TIME SINCE I WALKED THIS WALK .....THANKS! IT WAS JUST AS GRATIFYING AS THE ONES OF THE PAST.
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    tjcrawford commented on A Walk With Me

    12-03-2009

    Great imagery and symbolism! The structure of the poem is sound and aesthetically pleasing.
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    Trular

    12/04/2009

    Thanks TJ!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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