A Place On Earth

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    A Place On Earth

     I would like to know where to go
    To take the risk to explore
    A place I have never been to before
    Maybe to that exotic place on the coast

    To that museum that exhibits fine art or
    The restaurant with white chocolate fruit tart
    To the club playing the best music on the chart
    Even take a stroll to the park

    Maybe to the mall to buy new shoes
    Even take that Caribbean cruise or
    Consider the salon for an eyecatching hairdo
    Possibly go with friends to the zoo

    Probably fly to Paris to see the Eiffel Tower
    Maybe to India for yoga and some leisure
    To Spain, maybe become a flamenco dancer or
    Humble myself in a church and say a prayer

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    earthly commented on A Place On Earth

    03-14-2010

    I like this adventurer's/dreamer's trip-can I come along-lol...Earthly
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    blueberry

    03/14/2010

    Thanks for taking the time to read the poem. Sure you can come along!...lol

    Springsize commented on A Place On Earth

    03-02-2010

    there is nothing, anywhere of this existence, that I would trade to be paris the heiress, how heavy a load must she wear daily, in the fishbowl of every eye ? I would find one face and wear it only, too. I could not do the aero to somewhere new, while it must be expected of some who might choose instead, to be barefoot that morning. I love your stark attention to all the pretty sights that life does shine our way... and how you focused on and found peace, and soft solace within yourself... it just doesn't get much more beautiful than finding the holy within....
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    blueberry

    03/07/2010

    Thank You Springsize for taking the time to read the poem. I appreciate it.

    gogant commented on A Place On Earth

    02-28-2010

    If I were rich, I would love to do a lot of these things too...come to think of it...I need a new pair of shoes...but, I'll have to wait a while I guess. This is a marvelous litle ditty, Blue.........................gogant
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    blueberry

    02/28/2010

    Gogant, thanks alot for the comment. I appreciate you take the time to read it.

    pycho1 commented on A Place On Earth

    02-12-2010

    you have a very good eye for words. nice picture too.:)
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    blueberry

    02/13/2010

    I thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I appreciate your comments. Take Care.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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