A Loss

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    A Loss

    In the sky I fly like a bird
    my tears fall down as I scream to be heard
    as I pass through the clouds a sadness accrues
    at the moment I remember my mom saying i love you
    feeling the wind I regret such great loss
    why did he take such beauty, what a coward boss
    do I deserve such castigation
    now my heart is all desolation
    why do I feel such painful emotion

    my mother the most beautiful lover
    she cared so much and never was bothered
    flying in the sky I get hunted through no amnesty
    oh Lord, wherever she is allow my soul to be
    in thy name I beg for us to be free

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    tonia18 commented on A Loss

    06-23-2010

    i like this one its probubly my favorit it has alot of emotions in it, i was never close to my mom growing up idk y but i wasnt but they say even if u wernt close to ur mom it would still hurt an that a daughter cant lose her mom, something like that

    gregster

    06/23/2010

    nice to know........but do read on my list his pain our salvation i beg

    summerrose35 commented on A Loss

    02-12-2010

    beautiful praise to your beloved mother! you are a gem!

    gregster

    02/16/2010

    i wish i was gem....thx for comment GOD BLESS IN CHRIST JESUS NAME

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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