A LONG WAY DOWN

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    A LONG WAY DOWN

     It is a long way down
    I nearly crashed
    On to the ground
    However, I am still around
    I caught myself upon
    The force of the wind
    Coming up strong
    It is a long way down
    I came crashing down
    Upon the solid ground
    Where I am still around
    Knowing I will have
    A long way down
    To get up off the ground
    For it is a long way down
    I am still around
    Standing up looking down
    Seeing it is a long way down

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    tazboy74 commented on A LONG WAY DOWN

    10-11-2009

    You did it again. This is another well put together piece of writing. I did enjoy reading it.
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    dynamicd commented on A LONG WAY DOWN

    10-11-2009

    Keep them coming, please this is good stuff. You have something here and it is a winner.
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    supernana commented on A LONG WAY DOWN

    10-11-2009

    This is well written with a good flow. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it here with us.
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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