A Journey

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    A Journey

    I'm Still,
    As though my body is in a State of Paralyses.
    My breath is getting Slower and Slower.
    I can Perceive Sounds,
    but can't Grasp the Meanings.
    Suddenly there's Disturbing Feelings,
    they are all around me.
    Making me feel Insecure and Apprehensive.
    It's my Soul it's leaving me.
    I am moving Farther and Farther away.
    It's getting Darker and Darker.
    Where an I going I wonder.
    I see a Tunnel up ahead.
    It's Mysterious Looking.
    Then I see Little Sparksof Light,
    They're at the edge of the tunnel.
    They seem to be Guiding Me.
    As I enter the tunnel I see Light,
    tiny Sparks of Light all around me.
    They are ahead of me Lighting the Pathway.
    As I get toward the end of the Tunnel,
    I realize I too am a Little Spark of Light.
    There were many others everywhere.
    They are immersing themselves into what looks like A Light Beam.
    As I get closer to the beam I feel Warmth. it feels good.
    Should I step into the Beam like the others are
    I.m curious so I turn and walk into the Beam.
    In the beam I feel Peace of Mind,
    I also feel Clensed of all my Impurities.
    Some of the others are leaving.
    After a little while I hear a voice calling to me,
    it's time to go I heard the voice say.
    I am a little Hesitant,
    but I feel Confident I will be safe with them.
    We went back thru the tunnel.
    We were all taken to different places.
    I was Placed into a body,
    the body of a New Born Baby Boy.
    AND YES I BELIVE IN LIVE AFTER DEATH!!!  

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    MrGee commented on A Journey

    08-23-2010

    This is a well thought-out poem. The meter continues throughout the poem and you paint a good picture in the mind of this reader and yes we are all take to different places. The poem is similiar to one I have written entitled "The Journey" this is an obvious 10 from me.

    zan commented on A Journey

    11-02-2009

    wowo!!! This is something..........surprisingly it all seems familiar in some way!!! Great style and incredible flow....................Powerful!!!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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