A BROKEN SOUL

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    A BROKEN SOUL

    To ever lose oneself..is to have lost everything.To have lost everything is to never had gain nothing.Trying to be something i was not, for a love i never had..the gain belonging and lost what i did have. A wondering soul lost behind darkness.. there is no light to fine my way out. A wondering soul bond for the depths of hell..to free these thought i rather jump instead,to save my soul i ask him for help. Is it to late i ask myself? Then he reach out and gave me his hand.

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    Phoenix9 commented on A BROKEN SOUL

    12-28-2008

    very nice

    bforibus commented on A BROKEN SOUL

    12-28-2008

    very beautiful. if its sincere, thats about how long it takes.takes years of doubt and seconds to forgive. good write

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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