24 Years Under The Sun of Confusion

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    24 Years Under The Sun of Confusion

    Confused is the under statement. One minute I'm up da next hour I'm down. Da world keeps spinnin and I haven't begun to move. So dizziness takes control and at its will I chill, chill so hard I back track to juvenile thoughts, plus feelings; then think I'm cool; cool as da pimp on main, but still lame as his hoe on main. Maintaining is what I'm doing, but maintaining what is the clue or answer I have to choose. Playing with emotions is the equation or shall I say one of the equations to the problem of love ± life; but whats da formula for that night you felt sick to your stomache wanting for love but would settle for life, long as it turned out right you thought would suffice, but in actually a knife might do you right.

    by D. Perry aka ConChess

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    aatheart commented on 24 Years Under The Sun of Confusion

    03-15-2009

    I like it. The only issue I have is that it was diffcult to read. Allow your readers to understand your brilliance by using "poem lines". it keeps the flow :)

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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