#131

2 Comments

#131

A poem is an interesting breeder
delightfully satisfies the reader
tries to excite the whole litter
when written by a wicked critter

In sinful taste educates
amazing wonderings creates
critical response anticipates
aplauded when emancipates

Poem Comments

(2)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

mykhail commented on #131

02-10-2009

Personally, I liked it, even the last stanza!

ivecute77 commented on #131

12-02-2008

don't much care for the last line. but good job

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

lefteris’s Poems (22)

Title Comments
Title Comments
what if 0
Check this out 1
#136 (man in love) 1
#138(sometime
)
0
Buying u a drink 0
#120 (nature) 0
#121(DREAMS) 0
Twister 0
For my brother 0
#255 0
#234 0
WE ARE 0
#145 1
#114 0
#113 0
# 141 1
#87 #89 0
#145 0
anthropos 1
#112 1
#124 2
#131 2