HELP PLEASE!! its urgent
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HELP PLEASE!! its urgentWhy can't people be who they want to be? |
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RE: HELP PLEASE!! its urgentHi Britt! |
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RE: HELP PLEASE!! its urgentQuote: Originally Posted by britt Why can't people be who they want to be? Everyone can be different. It's not like we don't know 1+2=3 Were all worth more then 1 cent Why can't people be who they want to be? Theres nothing wrong with being who you are. You are you, and i am me. Why can't we be a shiney star Without someone making fun of our identity. Why can't people be who they want to be? Maybe someone just likes math, People just wont let some be free. Some people just tease and laugh. Why can't people be who they want to be? Its just wrong and unfair Making fun of someone for thier identity. People just dont understand and care. It honestly hurts them. Don't you see? theres nothing wrong with him. They want to be who they feel they should be. Just please Don't make fun of them for there identity. This poem is going to be submitten for a magazine at my school called 2010 Literary Magazine i haven't submitted it yet tell me what you think,, and tell my if its goof or bad be hoonest please.. It will have to be by 10/22/2010 please hurry:D &&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&& This poem of the didactic type is good,Britt. You have used the anaphora and refrain line very well, in order to keep your audience focussed on your question, "Why can't people be who that want to be. My opinion is, your poem is appropriate for your school magazine, However, ask a friend or an English teacher to edit it for you, before submitting it.. Kudos. |
The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.
Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)