Come Home (by KtIrish)

Come Home


I lit a candle in the window for you,
My love, My lost.
I lit a candle not knowing what to do,
To bring you home to me.

I keep it burning, shining bright,
My love, My lost.
I keep it burning day and night,
To guide you home to me.

I will the stars to shine for you,
My love, My lost.
The stars will shine, and my heart will too,
Until you are home with me.


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cousinsoren

This is unquestionablY a chant form heart yearning for love. I love the insistent repetiton of the chorus word. "home". Very effective versification I am beginning to admire Kt Irish's unigue skill in weaving her poetry with precfsely the right momosyllabic and dissyllabic words . She has a good style going!


THIS POETESS HAS CLASS! SHE HAS A GOOD , SNAPPY THING GOING! FIRWEWORKS AS SHE MATURES MORE AND MORE!..............................LOL

Last edited by cousinsoren 10-15-2009 at 03:54:34 AM